Lock'd Heart Pg 15

22 Sep 2006 05:33 pm

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Author's Comments:

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User's Comments:

Reply AngelicLily, 22 Sep 2006 06:14 pm

Beautiful! <3 *5'd.* >///<! W00T JOHN! XD

Reply Ghost the Echidna, 22 Sep 2006 10:36 pm

*sighs* still lovely art *eyes sparkle* methinks i shall make a fanart

Reply kingv, 19 Feb 2007 03:20 pm

What a super cute story! You earned a fav from me. ^^

Reply fuchainsaw, 04 Mar 2007 12:17 am

NYU! Well don my fellow kingdom hearts fan! I declare this royal manga....as one of my favorites!!! OH YEAH could u also check out my comic....its called mute. Check it out!!(NYU)!

Reply LadyBow, 25 Apr 2007 01:39 am

Cool. It's a neat idea to make another person traveling the worlds, but it's not really Kingdom Hearts fanfiction per se...I would probably just say that you're using their ideas, since you've chosen to exclude Sora, Goofy, Donald, and the others.

But, you have really cool art, especially the Disney style and the tree. I'm guessing you used a reference?

Well, one thing I would be careful of, however, is to stay away from cliches or predictable situations. I knew immediately that you were gonna take the easy way out when I saw that lock on the barn, and I feel like you should have spent a little more time so we could get to know your character. The barn thing was a tad too forced to get to the good stuff. But anyway, still a good job.

Reply Lost Heart, 28 Apr 2007 05:20 pm

W00t this is great cant wait for more ^^

Reply beefbag (Guest), 15 May 2007 09:30 am

stupendus! this is going on my favorites list.

by the way, is there any chance of the heros going to hogwarts? I know it's not disney, but tht would rock.

Reply js82492js, 08 Jun 2007 03:52 pm

Wo! I like this story! It looks good!

Reply heartless_dragon, 16 Jun 2007 04:50 pm

Wow, great comic. Faved!

Reply Narutootaku, 17 Jun 2007 01:18 am

Likies I like your comic. It contains an OC, but the OC isn't a mary sue! keep up the good work.
P.S. She should visit Robin hood's world, and the Aristocats world! XD

Reply Arisan, 14 Sep 2007 11:58 pm

How cute! I think I'll keep reading your comic. It seems like it'll be verrrrrry intersting! x3!
+fav. lololololol